午后MyfathermademealittlecabinonthetreewhenIwasfiveyearsold.Ilikethiscabinsomuch,i每日宠物资讯tismylittleworld.Iputmanytoysinit,Idecoratethiscabinsowell.IcandowhatIwantinthislittleworld,sometimesIwillaskmyfriendstocome.Ihaveagoodtimeinmylittleworld.
短评的这种特点使它非常适合承接短文缩写阶段，暴力而又为后期阶段打下一定的基础。拉升如针对上篇短文便可出一道相关命题引导学生习作：题目每日宠物资讯：shopsinChina提纲：(1)中国商店的作息时间(2)中国商店的周未服务情况(3)中国商店服务态度的好坏以上是关于英语习作初级阶段的训练步骤。
初学阶段的被缩写材料不宜太长，指3找以不超一千词为佳，缩写文以不超过2m词为佳。合理地设置训练程序，点7点使英语习作从初级到高级沿着一条循序渐进，由简到多的进程发展是成功训练者必须具备的指导思想。本篇认为，原因在习作训练每日宠物资讯的初期，应采纳一条从有材料可依的习作方式过渡到脱离本本进行自由写作方式的途径。
如对前文便可作以下评论：午后FromthearticlewelearnedaboutBritishshops,abouttheiropeningandclosingtimeandtheirservice.ButwefindthattherearesomethinginconvenientwithBritishshopservice.Firstisthetime.ShopsinBritainopenverylateandclosetooearly.SecondisthatthereisalmostnoSundayservice.Wherecanpeoplegoiftheysuddenlyneedtobuysomething?Thelastisthehabitofqueuing.Itwillbeawasteoftimeifthequeueistoolong.初学阶段，午后短文评论的字数一般也应在150字左右，不宜写大多。这些形式均可以用于训练，暴力但以提纲作文和关键词作文多用为佳.提纲作文是一种给出题目和段落提纲的习作方式，暴力其段落写作提纲可以采用段落主旨句的形式，也可以是短语。
MostshopsinBritainopenat9.00a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30intheevening.Smallshopsusuallycloseforanhouratlunchtime.Ononeortwodaysaweek-usuallyThursdayand/orFriday-somelargefoodshopsstayuntilabout8.00p.m.forlatenightshopping.Manyshopsareclosedintheafternoonononedayaweek.ThedaysisusuallyWednesdayorThursdayanditisadifferentdayindifferenttowns.NearlyallshopsareclosedonSunday.News-papershopsareopeninthemorning,andsellsweetsandcigarettesaswell.ButtherearelegalrestrictionsonsellingmanythingsonSundays.Manylargefoodshops(supermarkets)areself-service.Whenyougointooneoftheseshopsyoutakeabasketandyouputthethingsyouwishtobuyintoit.Youqueueupatthecash-deskandpayforeverythingjustbeforeyouleave.Ifanyonetriestotakethingsfromashopwithoutpayingtheyarealmostcertaintobecaught.Mostshopshavestoredetectiveswhohavethejobofcatchingshoplifters.Shopliftingisconsideredaseriouscrimebythepoliceandthecourts.Whenyouarewaitingtobeservedinashop,itisimportanttowaityourturn.Itisimportantnottotrytobeservedbeforepeoplewhoarrivedbeforeyou.ManypeoplefromoverseasareastonishedattheBritishhabitofqueuing.将短文缩写如下：拉升ThisarticletellsusaboutBritishshops.Britishshopsusuallyopenat9.00a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30p.m.Manyshopsareclosedintheafternoononedayaweek.NearlyallshopsareclosedonSundays.InBritain,manylargefoodshopsareself-service.Andwhenyouwaittobeservedinashop,youhavetowaitpatientlyforyourturn.这是一篇不超过100词的缩写，拉升句子基本上由原文各段落的主要内容构成。
从有材可依到元材可依的训练过程应包括三个阶段：指3找一、短文缩写(Summary)阶段。作为世界上最大的发展中国家，点7点中国为其对人类的空间探索作出自己的贡献感到非常骄傲。
喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，原因白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，原因蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后，午后巨大白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起，午后蔚为壮观，慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中
另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的，暴力他给我留了一张纸条，上面写着：我的礼物放在你的卧室里。我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包，拉升开始我认为是个足球，但打开后才发现是一个闹钟。
